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The Second Daughter from Broken again.
I'll write a journal or create a smackjeeves page or something soon. And yes, I went back to the big manga eyes for the entire story XD
So far I know I'll be posting about 20 pages online when they're finished. The rest of it... possibly? We might publish it on lulu, with the original written story included.
You can read the original here: [link]


It's really good, and I'm honestly terrified my manga version will pale in comparison :XD:
Speaking of manga.... I'm really conflicted with my own online manga right now XD
I like the story, so I wanna see it though and finish it...
But I hate the characters. Well, not hate really. I'm just kind of indifferent with them.

When I post my fabled sketch dump I'll explain XD Yay.
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~MarcieLou:iconMarcieLou: Aug 19, 2008, 1:00:27 PM
YAY!!!! I love this picture of her ( i like it better than the other one you drew, no offence XD), it's really perefect. and i doubt that you're story will pale in comparison XD have you seen the way you draw woman? XD ^_^ i'm so excited to see the finished product! ^_^ (oh, by the way, i really want you to do the cover art for my novel XD i want it to be abstract-ish, and i have an idea of how i want it to look once i'm done writing it, but i don't have the programs i need to do it myself... or the artistoc talent XD so i'm gonna need you to do it if you want to... XD)

i love this. ^_^

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~caybeach:iconcaybeach: Aug 19, 2008, 1:51:17 PM
ooh really pretty rebek!

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*Xiori:iconXiori: Aug 22, 2008, 6:24:07 AM
Cool! That would be awesome XD
I still haven't even thought of a cover for my own yet D: But I'm not near finished, so I guess it doesn't matter.
Have you made any progress??

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~caybeach:iconcaybeach: Aug 22, 2008, 6:53:07 AM
ur welcome^^

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~MarcieLou:iconMarcieLou: Aug 22, 2008, 7:22:48 PM
booya! ^_^ i'm at chapter seven. i acctually wrote chapter seven, and then this chapter was chapter eight, but then added chapter seven to six, so now this is chapter seven. XD lotta talk for nothing though. i'm still not even halfway yet. if anything, i'm only at the very start, just really starting to show the characters. XD which is sad 'cause it's 100 pages in... O.O wow.

how far in are you? (is your novel the one you say that you don't care about the characters or is it the manga? XD )

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*Xiori:iconXiori: Aug 23, 2008, 2:02:24 PM
It's the manga where I don't care about the characters. I was so 'obsessed' with my characters in the book last summer that them and the story was practically all I thought about for almost a week XD That's when I started writing the outline and everything.... if I didn't like the characters so much, I never would have even gotten that far. I never finish anything! XD


So what if it's a long novel? That's good, right? XD I'm really looking forward to it!
And I love how often you combine chapters XD I should probably do that, most of my chapters are, like, 10-15 pages long ^^; Yours are longer, I take it :XD:

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~MarcieLou:iconMarcieLou: Aug 23, 2008, 10:39:00 PM
sort of... XD most of them are roughly 15-18 pages, so they're not much longer than yours. XD some of them are also only 8 pages, and others are in the thirsties, so it really depends. i don't really care how long a chapter is, so long as it makes sense.

i try to write as often as i can, but i'm always doing something! XD how the hell do you make time for your sketches, fantasy sky, broken manag, novel and school? XD i'd go mental!

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MARCIE
*Xiori:iconXiori: Aug 27, 2008, 5:34:41 PM
My sketches happen when I get OCD, and have to draw the idea in my head XD So they're usually crap.
I've been neglecting Fantasy Sky, and Broken pages are really easy to draw because I like the story and how easy the characters are to draw XD And I really slowed the pacing, so it's, like, three to four frames per page XD
And I really only work on the novel on late nights. But when I do I just don't stop XD

Dunno how it's all gonna work out with school though. Heh heh. Btw, when do you have Creative Writing/ how was it? XD

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